9. Degree in Caretaking

Moms have recently been extremely picky and strict on how will tack care of their kids. It just happens that the perfect people for this roll are the graduated college students how are jobless. Many have a degree in law and economics, though fine arts are the most wonted type. With this, a questions rise up such as “Are these caretakers overqualified? Or rather, for all their training, do they possess the right qualifications?” The answer is that the care takers are only qualified if they know what to expect with the different ages and know haw to deal with it. Meaning not freeking out if a two ear old puts food in their hear.

The author is mildly confusing though she does have a good argument and information. The opening paragraph was interesting and caught my attention, though the concluding paragraph went completely out of topic. She does convey her message and has a good development of her argument. In all, her work was acceptable but good be better understood if conclusion was modified. 

http://www.slate.com/blogs/xx_factor/2013/09/13/educated_white_women_are_increasingly_interested_in_becoming_nannies_and.html