Dear Bea,
I really appreciated reading your reports. They flow really well and you did a great job summarizing the stories without giving away too much information to spoil the ending. You are however missing a couple transition phrases and I would advice you to read over your reports looking for spelling mistakes and repeated words. Besides that, I enjoyed the way you connected yourself with the book and your recommendation actually persuaded me to read Lincolns biography that's 900 pages long! In the other report though you lacked to state your opinion and recommendation, but the summary is very neat and understandable, giving the plot, the climax/conflict and resolution. In the Lincoln book a little more detailed or more facts on the summary would have given your report more credibility. The organization of the paragraphs is also pretty good, you separated topics and did not accumulate too much information on each of them.
Great Job,
Nick
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