This
article is about Austen Allred who lived in a car for three months
because
he was saving money, therefore, he could not waste money on rent. He
wrote
about his experience while living in a car and mentioned the positive
and negative
side of this new lifestyle. He suggested the readers to only take what
it is
really necessary and leave the other things behind because it is better
to have
some extra free space in the car. He explained that he had to control
his time because when the sun comes out, he cannot sleep due to
the heat and brightness, but on the other hand, it forces him to not
waste time
and do something productive. The negative part of this life style is
that he
needs more time to accomplish everything that he does. He also mentioned
that
he got more stressed because he was worried that the people might see
him
sleeping in a car since he did not tint his windows. He was unable to
change in
his car due to the space so he had to drive to a place where he can
change.
Most of the time, he ate canned food because he could not cook inside
his car
and he did not want to go to the store everyday to buy his food. The
last
difficulty he had is when his car broke and he had
to find places to live while it was getting fixed.
Allred used simple vocabularies to describe
his experiences while living in a car. He divided the essay into many different
parts and named them, making it easy for the readers to locate themselves. The
author`s main purpose is to reach the young adults who are planning to save
money on rent but have a place to live too. He took pictures of his own
experiences so that the readers can have an idea of this alternative lifestyle.
The informal language makes the whole essay easy to read and it is suitable for
its audience. He gave examples of the positive aspects of this lifestyle, but
he also mentioned about the negative side. He should have given more advices to
the readers who are planning to live in the car and not only talked about his experiences.
Overall, the article is good because he was able to achieve his objective by
using uncomplicated words to inform the readers about his unique lifestyle
while living in the car.
http://www.slate.com/blogs/quora/2013/08/01/financing_a_startup_i_lived_in_my_car_to_save_money.html
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