6.A problem of cosmic proportions

In this article the author (unamed)discusses a very contraversial and grand topic. He talks about three experiments that are being conducted to prove that dark matter does not exist. It has been known to scientists for a long time that the universe has been expanding and what generated this expansion was dark matter. However, scientists are starting to question if this theory is really true. All of these three experiments have the same basic idea which is to take pictures of space and record them for an amount of years  and later observe the shifting of space. The author also points out the crazyness of this theory and that it is a very dangerous topic to argue upon for it is one of the main points of space science that black matter exists and like he said “would hurt” to disprove them.

This article is well constucted with organized ideas and clear thesis. His main point was to expose people to this new idea. He did so stating about the three experiments being done throughout the world using it as his body paragraphs and his three main points. The author explain the basics of space like dark matter and expansion and also talks about more in deptch subjects. He explains complicated subjects with the most simplicity giving the reader a chance to understand fully his message. Overall he was sucessful and did a good job by having a clear and concise essay portraying his image in a fun and interesting way.